The rules are simple: 50-500 word scene or flash fiction with a dark feel (whatever dark means to you - your interpretation - get creative or literal, it doesn't matter). But, - isn't there always a but? You must use all of the following 'M' words in your piece, but don't just pack 'em in there, it should make sense. You should treat it like any other piece of writing you do because there will be so many new friends reading. Thrill us with your skill and adept flair:
mist(y)
mambo
moon
musk(y)
mongrel
myth
And so, without further ado, I give you my short contribution.
Mambo by Moonlight
Dance, you mongrel! Dance beneath the stars. Dance like you need to, as if lust drives your arms, your feet, your hips.
I don’t care if you’re tired. Want to test me? I’ll show you how well I wield my whip.
Your mambo this evening is our hope made reality. You were handpicked from many for curve of your flank, the smooth character of your flesh. Our myths and legends tell us you will save our world, our lifestyle, if only this one night you would dance for us beneath the moon.
So would you just shut up and dance already! Look like you care. Pretend you want to use your musky body to lure us to you, bring us closer in lustful mambo seduction. Ignore any knowledge you have of what happens once the mambo ends.
Oh, the mist is clearing. The moon shines bright. Watch as the heavens open and our Redeemer comes forth. Oh, accept our sacrifice, great Redeemer! For we love and cherish your protection.
And don’t worry, mongrel. Our Redeemer’s teeth are sharp. It’ll only hurt for a moment.
Any comments are welcome. Thanks for reading!
I'm taking suggestions today for the letter T. Have any? Leave them below. Thanks!

18 comments:
I love challenges like this. Wish I would have known. You did a marvelous job. i love the voice. Don't think I'll be messing with you anytime soon. lol
oooh creepy! Me likes! I love your title too- I dunno why but the word 'Mambo' makes me smile...
Love the last line!
Lets see the letter "T"
you could write a flash piece with the words "trance" "taint" and "tempt"
Good job! 'It'll only hurt for a moment.'
Love that line!
Thanks for sharing.
HMG
Loved the last line! Great job!
this post was great, especially the last line.
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Very Cool. Great feel and relentless taskmaster too.
Thanks for entering the fest!
Wow some great lines here, so what happens next?
Ouch! Poor person.
Wow. Great use of all these M words today. Cool story.
Hi,
Nice piece: plenty of atmosphere via narrator voice! ;)
best
F
Wow! Loved the twist ending. Well done!
Great job. I love the last line. It says it all. Creepy and fascinating at the same time. Nice job.
Fantastic voice in this entry. Powerful and seductive.... Well done, Rosie.
Great job this was an interesting read. Good job on the use of the words.
I look forward to reading your story once I finish mine Rosie, I don't want your darkness looming over mine LOL
Good writing. T...well I'm still far behind on the challenge so I'm not much help. Good to 'meet' you.
Gems x
Agh, what a horrifying ending! Poor mongrel.
You clearly had fun with it. A fun read!
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